Very good – level 4 You clearly display 180 degree rule, M on A and S/RS Good example of cross cutting and you succeed in creating real tension.
Some of your lighting is problematic – it is very dark in places. Perhaps bare this in mind for the final piece. Nice POV shot too. Good use of sound editing as well. Good use of setting and props and you had to co ordinate an actor. Well done.
You will still need to have that discussion about how your film demonstartes each of the 3 continuity tasks.
ReplyDeleteVery good – level 4
ReplyDeleteYou clearly display 180 degree rule, M on A and S/RS
Good example of cross cutting and you succeed in creating real tension.
Some of your lighting is problematic – it is very dark in places. Perhaps bare this in mind for the final piece. Nice POV shot too. Good use of sound editing as well. Good use of setting and props and you had to co ordinate an actor. Well done.